Here is a glimpse at an edited version of the first draft of Dead Skin Dave, the Pirate.
You can see how many things get commented on and edited after that “perfect” first draft. It’s just a reminder that your story is never really
done, especially when you think it is perfect.
very interesting. Who critiqued your work for you. There were some very good suggestions and thoughts.
An old co-worker of mine, who is also into the writing business, edited the first draft for me.